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Friday 8 June 2018

Animal town

This week we have used another picture as motivation for our writing.
We had a story starter and then we had to carry on the story.
What I like about my writing is getting to write about the animals.
I need to improve on doing more writing.

Here is my writing about Animal Town.

Animal town

Animal town is a place with lots of Animals. Like lions and parrots and apes and bears and giraffes.
The grouchy hungry lion was roaring really loud like the king. Well he is pretty much the king.
I could imagine the the lion wearing a crown.




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