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Friday 8 June 2018

Hot air balloon writng

This week we have used a picture as motivation for our writing.
We had a story starter and then we had to carry on the story.
What I like about my writing is it is fun.
I need to improve on getting it done faster.

When I was rising in my hot air balloon the Sky Tower was getting smaller and smaller. But everything else was so small because the sky tower is so tall and everything else is so short.

I was going to Hong Kong. I bought some guns incase their were big birds along the way. I brought a small mattress, sleeping bag, water and food.




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