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Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Friday, 17 September 2021

Poetry Week 8 Term 3 2021

For the last two weeks we have been learning about different kinds of poetry for reading and writing. I decided to publish this poem. It is a cinquain poem about chocolate.


Friday, 27 August 2021

Writing Week 5 Term 3 2021 My Metamorphosis

 Yet another thing we did for writing this week was to imagine that we had undergone metamorphosis. 

We had to pretend we had woken up one morning and discovered we had changed. It would be like going to sleep as a caterpillar and waking up as a butterfly. We had to write about what our new body was like and what we could do. I chose to wake up and turn into VENOM

Here is my work.


Wednesday, 23 June 2021

Personification

We have been learning about personification. Here is a couple of personification sentences about the stars.

Monday, 17 May 2021

Feathers Writing Week 2 Term 2 2021

This week we went on a hunt in the playground to see if we could find some feathers. We didn’t find any but luckily our teachers had collected some so then we came back to class and wrote about them using our senses of sight and touch to describe them I did an acrostic poem here is my work hope you like it⤵

Tuesday, 13 April 2021

Week 10 Term 1 2021

This writing task was about a language experience. Our teachers brought different kinds of chocolate to school and we got to eat it! We tried white chocolate, milk chocolate, dark chocolate, caramel chocolate and pink chocolate. We could write about it in any way we liked but our teachers hoped we would use lots of describing language and our senses.



Thursday, 1 April 2021

Week 6 Term 1 2021 Couplet Poem

We are learning how to write a couplet poem. We looked at an example on page 32

  of SJ 1.4 1992. Then we had to choose our own noun, two opposite adjectives to

describe it, think of rhyming words for the end of each line and finish the last line

with a onomatopoeia word repeated 3 times. Here is my work

Wednesday, 31 March 2021

The old Church Week 7

In Week 7, our class went to look at the outside of the old church building which is next to our school. We had to write using lots of adjectives, adverbs, specific nouns and vivid verbs so that we described it well. We tried to remember to use ideas from our senses and to write about not just what we thought the old church looked like but also how it made us feel.



Thursday, 18 February 2021

The Life Cycle Of A Butter Fly

Kia ora 

We are learning that basic punctuation means that you have a capital letter at the start of a sentence, and a full stop, question mark or exclamation mark at the end of every sentence when you do a piece of writing.

Here is my writing about the life cycle of a Monarch butterfly.



 1: This is a life cycle of a Monarch butterfly. 

2: The butterfly lays an egg on the live for a swan plant.

3: Egg hatches into caterpillar.

4: The caterpillar eats and gets bigger.

5: The caterpillar turns into a chrysalis.

6: After while Butterfly comes out.

Friday, 31 July 2020

Lahar Blog post


Today we built Mt Ruapehu in the sandpit. We also made the Whangaehu River valley, the plain below the mountain and the railway bridge at Tangiwai. We wanted to learn how the lahar destroyed the bridge in 1953 causing the Tangiwai Disaster. Kora and Ariana poured lots of water into the crater we had made on top of our mountain. It whoosed down the side of the mountain and into the river valley. The bridge collapsed and bits of our train fell into the river. After that, we watched a short video about what do do if you are on Mt Ruapehu when the lahar siren sounds.  Now I know how to keep safe from a lahar if one happens when I am on a mountain.  Here is my Hazard Notice with the most important information.


Wednesday, 24 June 2020

Underpants Writing

Mrs A was reading a book about Aliens stealing your underpants and mostly the rest of the class wrote a story to but if you want to see my story just look down. I wrote about these booger spraying beasts and about these deep dark woods.

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Thursday, 18 June 2020

SPACE WRITING

Writing

Last wensday we made some couplets and I  made four of them the rest of the class did this to and if you want to see mine just look down.


Friday, 13 September 2019

Science Fair


Yesterday we had our school science fair. My science investigation was about ramps as you can see down in the photo.

Tuesday, 13 August 2019

Bridge Building

*We have been learning about forces and how they help *shape the sort of bridges that we build.  
*We learned that there are three main types of bridge *design; beam, truss and suspension.  Using this *knowledge we designed and built our own bridges.
*Miss Fletcher set the challenge that our bridges had to *be 30 cm long and strong enough to hold an object.
*In my group there were Asbjorn Laniey Charle and *Khloe.  We used (list the materials you used barbaqu *scures a egg cartian)  to build our bridge.
*Here is a photo of our Beam bridge.  What I like best *about our bridge is That it is tall).


Friday, 24 May 2019

Planet earth and beyond


This week we have been writing about space.  Here is a peice of my writing.

Friday, 22 March 2019

House colour poem

We have been writing about our house group colours. I am in blue house. 


Friday, 15 March 2019

Enviromental Writing

We sketched our bean plants that we grew in class. We then wrote words around the outside to describe the bean plant. We had to use these words to write a piece of descriptive writing. We then cut out our picture and glued it on to your writing. Here is my writing. 





Friday, 30 November 2018

Poems

This week we have been writing poems. We wrote haiku and acrostic poems. Here are some I wrote


Summer sun  
Using peples                                                            
Monster Truck
Milk
Eating lots of yummy food
Rich people

Friday, 26 October 2018

Greats and Grands day

Last week we had our Greats and Grands day. We wrote poems for our grandparents.
Here is my poem about why my grandparents are so special.


Thursday, 20 September 2018

Ladder Snake Writing

We have been learning about procedural writing
and here is my rules about the snake game we played.